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Enjoying this so much. that I wished it was a book, thanks to all involved.

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This was so much fun. I laughed out loud several times, loved it! Where will the story go next? Who knows. Oh wait a minute..... I know!

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Well, Philip may or may not turn out to have a double life, but if the officer is calling for backup, looks like Charlotte may have more than clothes & shoes in her closet. The web's a spinnin... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ndL_qEIqZ60

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This was great fun Tonika. Looking forward to seeing in what unexpected, and hopefully politically incorrect, direction the corpse turns next.

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Politically Incorrect are my middle names so I will endeavour to oblige! Loved your episode, thanks so much for making me laugh out loud.

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Can't wait!

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I’m so glad you hopped on the cadaver, my friend! Definitely elevated the experience!

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This is so fun! The "highest speed windshield wiping" required to dislodge Philip was my first guffaw out loud. The image of that!

Another hard act to follow. Now we have the potential triangle--is the freshly divorced officer going to cuckold the dreams of the now-incapacitated Philip? Who's up next, Tonika? Can you reveal your sources and whet our appetites?

Great job, Isaac, of keeping us guessing and giving us a glimpse of Charlotte through the officer's reaction!

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Well the best person coming up is a Brit. And the last one is a Brit too. I was just telling Isaac that we need

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Oops. Fat fingers. I was about to say that we need an American for the “falling action” segment. But I’m at school at the moment and have limited bandwidth - the school wifi is blocking certain pages from loading.

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Haha, I assumed that was 'the next person' and not 'the best person' coming up ;-) But if that's a hint, I'll take up the challenge. Unless another of our smart(assed) American friends have already stepped up.

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lol! Yes, I meant “next” person is a Brit. And of course I was hoping you’d come up to bat, T! You’re on for week 4!! It would be a real treat! I’ll msg you about it after week three gets published. And you certainly will be the best American on board!

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Excellent, and I'll have two weeks to figure out what falling action is!

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Lemme know if you need examples from movies. It’s usually the very exciting parts where the protagonists try to solve their conflict and struggle.

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Now that I'm caught up - just read the first which I missed - this is so much fun, Tonika.

Beats dooms strolling and crypto checking for sure! And yes, been loving Issac's posts. Thanks for this creative diversion from the usual.

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Thanks, Kathleen! That’s why I’m enjoying all the poetry y’all have been putting out lately. I just realised I had read your post yesterday and then got diverted away without leaving my 3c (inflation). I’ll fix that shortly.

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Maybe there's general moving away from the daily blow-by-blows in the ethers right now? I'm definitely finding that. No worries - I do that all the time. :-)

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I think you’re right. And it’s the holidays! Time for some damn joy, right? 😬

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Hell yeah!

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I CONCUR.

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